love and faith
Walking down
the aisle, June asks herself, whether she has chosen the right path or whether
she will be swinging forever between what she desired to have and what she has
received. Her father accompanied her and they both proceed towards the stand of
bishop. She was looking like beautiful flake of snow that has engulfed whole
whiteness of the season and her hair were tied in a bun and there rest a
beautiful piece of hair pin, made of ivory and blue crystals, what a fine
masterpiece, crafted all by her mother, Lina, a perfectionist in making
jewellery. Back of her dress was all lacy and her beautifully toned body was
supporting the attire very well. Relatives and other visitors present in the
ceremony were in awe after having a glance of her.
As she raised her eyes to have full look of
the arrangements that Roy, her future husband, has made, she was thrived to see
such a vintage look that he has given to the place. It was beautiful day of
spring, Greenery was all over the place, as she always dreamed of, and white
calla Lilies were used to decorate the poles. Benches like old logs were placed
for visitors as seating arrangements. Sidelines of the aisle were covered with
white carnations. Everyone loved the place and so did she.
All these
things were adorable and they diverted her mind for a second but again
nervousness flooded her. She held her father’s hand more firmly and her father
was able to sense her feelings. He calmly told her “everything is perfect just
like you and Roy and I know that you will do well in this phase of life as
well.” She smiled and her smile assured her father that he was right about it.
She wanted to believe in what her father told her but that was not happening.
As she took
the turn towards the deck and she saw Roy standing there. He was looking daper
in his steel grey tuxedo. In normal days, he was true to his business and put
forward more of his formal look. But today, he was standing there being as a
lover who is fond of her girl and nothing in world can take her away from him. As
he saw her, he was overwhelmed and was feeling proud to have her as partner.
She can see his desperation right from his shiny brown eyes. She was feeling
all her strength coming back. Her father gave her hand to Roy. Roy held her
hand and she felt secure. Rituals got started and they got married in beautiful
manner. Everyone enjoyed the moments with newly wedded couple.
After twenty
five years, sitting in the chair, June was reliving those moments and watching
the photo album. She was noticing difference in her and Roy’s appearance as
well. Wrinkles have covered their faces and brightness was gone. That wedding
ring has lost its shine as well but still it was giving beautiful look to her
hands and their relation. Now sitting back and thinking of that time, anything
that she managed to remember was the two enchanting words “I DO”.
Roy came
behind her and caught her between her arms and asked, “YOU DO?” and she replied
“I WILL AND WILL ALWAYS DO”.
This was a cute little thing... like it could be the opener to a much larger story.
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Also focus on being descriptive, without being wordy.
Looking forward to more!
thanks . I will definitely work on my mistakes..
DeleteThis was a cute little thing... like it could be the opener to a much larger story.
ReplyDeleteAdd a bit different sentence starters, and there are grammatical things like adding an article to "Back"; "appearance" at the end should be plural.
Also focus on being descriptive, without being wordy.
Looking forward to more!
Awesome.....
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